2.  (Worse) Joint cooperation between the two organizations depends on whether the available resources are adequate enough.  (Better) Cooperation between the two organizations depends on adequate available resources.

3.  (Worse) A major breakthrough in modern technology of today is the emergence of artificial intelligence.  (Better) A breakthrough in modern technology is the emergence of artificial intelligence.

4.  (Worse) The major benefit of the proposal is that the true facts about the very unique industrial situation can be obtained.  (Better) The major benefit of the proposal is the ability to obtain the facts about the unique industrial situation.

5.  (Worse) The final outcome between the two teams was an unexpected surprise.  (Better) The outcome between the two teams was a surprise.

6.  (Worse) During that period in time, the fabrics were of cheap quality and rough in texture.  (Better) During that period, the fabrics were cheap and rough textured.

7.  (Worse) The physical phenomenon that occurs in the physics field is often times of an uncertain condition and extreme in degree.  (Better) The physical phenomenon that occurs in physics is often uncertain and extreme.

8.  (Worse) The terrible tragedy was unusual in nature and of a strange type.  (Better) The tragedy was unusual and strange.

9.  (Worse) It is the terminal that communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.  (Better) The terminal communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.

10.  (Worse) There is an engineer who adjusts the parameters.  (Better) An engineer adjusts the parameters.

11.  (Worse) It is computer networking that allows a group of interconnected computers to achieve a number of important tasks.  (Better) Computer networking allows a group of interconnected computers to achieve many (OR several) important tasks.

12.  (Worse) There is a manager who makes a compilation of the data and performs an arrangement of the assignments.  (Better) A manager compiles the data and arranges the assignments.

13.  (Worse) It is ink jet printers that vastly outsell laser and multifunction printers in view of the fact that they print in color as well as black and white.  (Better) Ink jet printers vastly outsell laser and multifunction printers because they print in color as well as black and white.