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1 LAZIZHON AHMEDOV (UZBEKISTAN) CAREER DOCUMENTS SHOWCASE BY ahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.com LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW Flag of Uzbekistan courtesy of www.mapsofworld.com 00% 29% 23% F F CAREER DOCUMENT 1 CAREER DOCUMENT 2 JOB AD 1 LETTER 1 CV JOB AD 2 LETTER 2 RESUME 40%

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3 PASSFAIL 01. IMAGE FILE: Two job advertisements are selectedPASSFAIL 02. IMAGE FILE: Each job ad can be attached or uploaded as a separate image filePASSFAIL 03. CV PRACTICE: One job ad requires a CVPASSFAIL 04. RESUME PRACTICE: One job ad requires a resumePASSFAIL 05. LETTER FORMAT 1: A one-page letter in full block formatPASSFAIL 06. LETTER FORMAT 2: A one-page letter in modified block formatFAIL 07. SENDER FORMAT 1: One letter uses a letterheadFAIL 08. SENDER FORMAT 2: One letter uses a full signatureFAIL 09. PERSUASION: Reader is convinced to interview the senderPASSFAIL 10. CV: A short CV targets all the receiver’s needsFAIL 11. RESUME: A short resume targets all the receiver’s needsFAIL 12. ORIGINALITY: Nothing in the documents can be proven as plagiarizedFAIL 13. VERACITY: All contents can be proven true by certificates, documents, etc.PASS 14. ATTACHMENTS: All attachments are mentioned in the letter (no “please find”) PASS 43% ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : CAREER DOCUMENTS LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW 00% AUTOMATIC 00%

4 Letter 1Letter 2Total 01. CONTENT: There are no content errorsFAIL 02. FORMAT: There are no formatting errorsFAIL 03. MECHANICS: There are no errors in mechanicsFAIL 04. LANGUAGE REGISTER: A professional tone is usedPASSFAIL 05. ADDRESSEE: The letter addresses a specific personPASS 06. FOCUS: The letter focuses on receiver and benefits to receiverPASS 07. TARGET: Each item in the job ad is addressedFAIL 08. TARGET: Any unconnected item is clearly connectedFAIL 09. STRUCTURE: First and last paragraphs include a positive idea + something about the receiver’s company or institution FAIL 10. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarize receiver needs (job specs)FAIL 11. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what sender can doPASS 12. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what receiver can do to benefit from the sender’s offerings or abilities PASS 13. BREVITY, CONCISENESS: There are no unnecessary words or elementsFAIL 14. PROFESSIONALISM: The overall effect is clean and business-like.PASSFAIL 29% ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : PERSUASION ELEMENTS LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW 29% AUTOMATIC 00%

5 APPLICATION WITH CV CAREER DOCUMENT 1 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW

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7 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW No proof

8 30 November 2013 140 Broadway Suite 4600 New York, NY 10005 Dear Ms. Trina, Well known epic educational institution seem to be need a highly qualified individual which I happened to be. Your offering for IT program developer is completely suitable with my degree as currently I am pursuing computer science in Albukhary International University. The abilities I am getting in international community at university helping me to overcome difficulties and working as a team focusing on a long term as your institution required candidates to be. In Addition, you may be pleased to hear that I am offering to work for half of salary in the first working month. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to the opportunity to speak with you about my candidacy in more details. As you required I attached my CV including my contact details. Best regards, Lazizhon Ahmedov (Mr.) Computer Science Scholar School of ICT Albukhary International University Alor Setar, 05200 Malaysia 30 November 2013 140 Broadway Suite 4600 New York, NY 10005 Dear Ms. Trina, Well known epic educational institution seem to be need a highly qualified individual which I happened to be. Your offering for IT program developer is completely suitable with my degree as currently I am pursuing computer science in Albukhary International University. The abilities I am getting in international community at university helping me to overcome difficulties and working as a team focusing on a long term as your institution required candidates to be. In Addition, you may be pleased to hear that I am offering to work for half of salary in the first working month. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to the opportunity to speak with you about my candidacy in more details. As you required I attached my CV including my contact details. Best regards, Lazizhon Ahmedov (Mr.) Computer Science Scholar School of ICT Albukhary International University Alor Setar, 05200 Malaysia LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW Plagiarism (F) See: Ali Hossen Plagiarism (F) See: Ali Hossen

9 Lazizhon Ahmedov Current Address: Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah, Malaysia Permanent Address: № 737, Mustaqillik st., Margilan city, Fergana state, Uzbekistan Phone (Malaysia): +6184031107 Email: ahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.comahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.com Website: My Career ShowcaseMy Career Showcase LinkedIn: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Skype: lazizxon.ahmedov Facebook: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Twitter: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Education Albukhary International University Ongoing Computer Science scholar Albukhary International University August 2013 One Year Full Time Foundation Studies GPA: 3.11/4.00 Fergana Juridical College July 2011 Diploma in Law 8-high school May 2008 High school diploma Achievements and awards Certificate of Achievement 2 November 2013 Job Readiness exam review 80/100 Certificate of Achievement 2 November 2013 Pre-employment English Test 90/100 Certificate of Participation24 March 2013 Leadership Empowerment Programme Certificate of Participation26 April 2012 IEP Intergroup Debate Project Certificate of Participation23 February 2013 Impromptu Speech Competition Certificate of Participation 25 April 2003 Arab language competition 2 nd place Languages Uzbek, native language. Russian, fluent. English, fluent. Arabic, intermediate. Lazizhon Ahmedov Current Address: Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah, Malaysia Permanent Address: № 737, Mustaqillik st., Margilan city, Fergana state, Uzbekistan Phone (Malaysia): +6184031107 Email: ahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.comahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.com Website: My Career ShowcaseMy Career Showcase LinkedIn: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Skype: lazizxon.ahmedov Facebook: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Twitter: a.Lazizhona.Lazizhon Education Albukhary International University Ongoing Computer Science scholar Albukhary International University August 2013 One Year Full Time Foundation Studies GPA: 3.11/4.00 Fergana Juridical College July 2011 Diploma in Law 8-high school May 2008 High school diploma Achievements and awards Certificate of Achievement 2 November 2013 Job Readiness exam review 80/100 Certificate of Achievement 2 November 2013 Pre-employment English Test 90/100 Certificate of Participation24 March 2013 Leadership Empowerment Programme Certificate of Participation26 April 2012 IEP Intergroup Debate Project Certificate of Participation23 February 2013 Impromptu Speech Competition Certificate of Participation 25 April 2003 Arab language competition 2 nd place Languages Uzbek, native language. Russian, fluent. English, fluent. Arabic, intermediate. LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW

10 APPLICATION WITH RESUME CAREER DOCUMENT 2 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW

11 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW No Proof

12 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW

13 Albukhary International University Jalan Tun Abdul Razak Alor Setar, Kedah Darul Aman, 05200 Tel: +604 – 774 7300 Website: www.aiu.edu.mywww.aiu.edu.my NOVEMBER 30, 2013 Prof. Haris Bilal Punjab College Admission Office 1-Noon Avenue, New Muslim Town, Lahore Dear Prof. Haris, Your advertisement on careersinpk.com for the position social media manager seem to be very attractive. I am offering my service and abilities for this position, because I feel confident that your company will benefit more than before. My active usage of social networking like Facebook, LinkedIn and others gave vital knowledge of how to operate them. Currently I am studying Computer Science at Albukhary International University and it is fully related to internet and social media. In addition, my other skills stated in the advertisement make gives me confidence to say that you won’t regret if you accept my candidate for this position. As you required my resume with contact information and recent photograph is attached below. I will be looking forward to your response. Thank you for your time and consideration. Warm regards, LazizXon (Mr.) Albukhary International University Jalan Tun Abdul Razak Alor Setar, Kedah Darul Aman, 05200 Tel: +604 – 774 7300 Website: www.aiu.edu.mywww.aiu.edu.my NOVEMBER 30, 2013 Prof. Haris Bilal Punjab College Admission Office 1-Noon Avenue, New Muslim Town, Lahore Dear Prof. Haris, Your advertisement on careersinpk.com for the position social media manager seem to be very attractive. I am offering my service and abilities for this position, because I feel confident that your company will benefit more than before. My active usage of social networking like Facebook, LinkedIn and others gave vital knowledge of how to operate them. Currently I am studying Computer Science at Albukhary International University and it is fully related to internet and social media. In addition, my other skills stated in the advertisement make gives me confidence to say that you won’t regret if you accept my candidate for this position. As you required my resume with contact information and recent photograph is attached below. I will be looking forward to your response. Thank you for your time and consideration. Warm regards, LazizXon (Mr.) LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW Formatting error Content error Formatting error

14 LAZIZHON AHMEDOV CONTACT INFORMATION: HOME ADRESS: HOME №737, MUSTAQILLIK STREET, MARGILAN CITY, FERGHANA STATE, UZBEKISTAN. CURRENT ADRESS: JALAN TUN ABDUL RAZAK, ALOR SETAR, KEDAH, MALAYSIA. HOME PHONE №: +998713445654. MOBILE PHONE №: +60184031107. E-MAIL: ahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.com, a.lazizhon@gmail.com Education 1999 – 2003 [“Shirin” named gymnasium] 2003- 2008[8-High school][Margilan, Uzbekistan] [Certificate] [The school which consisted of 9 years intensive education.] 2008 - 2011[Fergana Juridical College] [Fergana, Uzbekistan] [Diploma] [It was lyceum which consisted of 3 years education.] 2012 - 2013[Albukhary International University] [Foundation Studies Certificate] [One year full-time Foundation studies] 2013 – [Albukhary International University] [Undergraduate Diploma] [Currently Studying] SKILLS IT skills – Microsoft Office, HTML, C#. Leadership skills – ability to lead a group to achieve one mission. Communication skills – ability to speak in 3 different languages as Uzbek, English, and Russian. Thinking skills – ability to think critically and creatively. Decision-making skills – ability to make effective decisions. LAZIZHON AHMEDOV CONTACT INFORMATION: HOME ADRESS: HOME №737, MUSTAQILLIK STREET, MARGILAN CITY, FERGHANA STATE, UZBEKISTAN. CURRENT ADRESS: JALAN TUN ABDUL RAZAK, ALOR SETAR, KEDAH, MALAYSIA. HOME PHONE №: +998713445654. MOBILE PHONE №: +60184031107. E-MAIL: ahmedov.lazizhon@gmail.com, a.lazizhon@gmail.com Education 1999 – 2003 [“Shirin” named gymnasium] 2003- 2008[8-High school][Margilan, Uzbekistan] [Certificate] [The school which consisted of 9 years intensive education.] 2008 - 2011[Fergana Juridical College] [Fergana, Uzbekistan] [Diploma] [It was lyceum which consisted of 3 years education.] 2012 - 2013[Albukhary International University] [Foundation Studies Certificate] [One year full-time Foundation studies] 2013 – [Albukhary International University] [Undergraduate Diploma] [Currently Studying] SKILLS IT skills – Microsoft Office, HTML, C#. Leadership skills – ability to lead a group to achieve one mission. Communication skills – ability to speak in 3 different languages as Uzbek, English, and Russian. Thinking skills – ability to think critically and creatively. Decision-making skills – ability to make effective decisions. LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW This resume does not seem to provide clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver. This resume does not seem to be designed to show clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver.

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