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1 Run on Sentences!!! By Jason, Jeremiah, and Megan

2 Run on Sentences Are when two or more independent clauses are joined improperly. Comma splices are improper attempts to fix this problem by adding a comma between the two clauses.

3 Fixes!!! With run-on sentences you could A. turn them into two sentences. B. use a semicolon, instead of a comma C. add a coordinating conjunction after a comma D. use transitional words E. add a subordinating conjunction to the beginning of a sentence.

4 Making two sentences He went to Wal-Mart he bought some eggs. He went to Wal-Mart. He bought some eggs. When you have two independent clauses, you can use a period to form two complete sentences.

5 Semicolon He went to K-Mart, he wanted tupperware. He went to K-Mart; he wanted tupperware. If you use a semicolon instead of comma, then you can keep the syntax as is, and avoid comma splicing.

6 Coordinating Conjunctions He went to Toys-R-Us, he wanted a Cabbage Patch Kid. He went to Toys-R-Us, for he wanted a Cabbage Patch Kid. To easily avoid comma splicing, you can keep the comma but add a coordinating conjunction after it.

7 Transitional Words I decided to go to Roses, I would regret it. I decided to go to Roses; however, I would regret it. To fix comma splicing you can add a transitional word after a semicolon where the comma would have gone.

8 Subordinating Conjunctions You go to Bass Pro Shop, I will cry. If you go to Bass Pro Shop, I will cry. Adding a subordinating conjunction makes the first clause dependant, but this is fixed by the comma between to two commas.

9 " The Run-on Sentence, AKA The Sentence Masher, The Runaway." The English Departments SGU. Acadia University. 26 Jun 2007.


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