1. No man is an island, Entire of itself, Every man is a piece of the continent, A part of the main. If a clod be washed away by the sea, Europe is the less. As well as if a promontory were. As well as if a manor of thy friend's Or of thine own were: Any man's death diminishes me, Because I am involved in mankind, And therefore never send to know for whom the bell tolls; It tolls for thee. No Man Is An Island by John Donne (1572-1631)

2. Response Wreck the poem down to 5 lines to capture the main idea On your sheet cross out all but 5 lines that you think capture the poem’s message

3. My Inspiration Why does the bell toll? For whom does the bell toll? The song (sound) of solitude Why the sudden song of the bells? It belongs here even though it breaks the silence, Is a part of this place like winter has its snow. Does it sound for the squirrels scurrying over the ground? Does it ring out the cries of the wind? Does it ring out the cries of the wind? Maybe it tolls for the people who pass While the notes echo on the ground.

4. Personal Memoir Writer’s Workshop Day 11 2 nd Draft Writing: STAR

5. Learning Targets I can rewrite a weak simple sentence in my 1 st draft to have a stronger verb. I can add descriptive details or figurative language to “show” a significant moment I can rearrange the order of sentences or paragraphs to make a more logical flow

6. Monday: I skated over to my teammates. Tuesday: Wednesday: Thursday: Friday:

7. Note Taking Continue where we left off yesterday in the Editing section Remember your highlighter colors https://www.youtube.com/watch ?v=hqwL0ew6aZY https://www.youtube.com/watch ?v=hqwL0ew6aZY

8. A for Add Detail Description New Information Figurative Language Development Clarification of meanings Expanded Ideas

9. R for Rearrange The sequence to produce a desired effect The order for a more logical flow

10. The Five Rules for Writing Dialogue Rule 1Rule 2Rule 3Rule 4Rule 5 Use quotation marks. Separate dialogue tags from the quote with commas. Capitalize the first letter of the word of the conversation in quotation marks. Add end marks in the correct places. Start a new, indented paragraph each time a new character speaks

11. Closure Fill in one box on the Independent Correction Sheet based on your revision work today HW reminder: Share draft via 365; continue with STAR revisions as needed