1. I am really cross about your literacy!

2. In conclusion we can agree that yes, the Nazis did kill a lot of soviet with the tally reaching 8 million but overall only being 21.1% of their entire forces, the Nazis also did invade when Russia were not fully prepared and Stalin going in to hiding, consequently coving a lot of ground in the first week. So, ‘how far do I agree with the statement’, myself personally would claim that casualty death rate was not biggest impact on the USSR, the main impact was the damage to the infrastructure, the shear destruction of society, economy and national psyche by far outweighs 8 out 34 million casualties. It will have taken many more years to replenish the infrastructure than replace said 8 million. With the whole modernization project of the 1930s having to be begun again almost from scratch. What was the main impact of the Second World War on the USSR?

3. Top 9 tips 1.Build time into the writing process for editing 2.Resources to help – e.g. word mats, dictionaries, literacy criteria 3.Student record of common errors 4.Different colours for different areas e.g. green = spellings, blue = punctuation, red = capital letters 5.Focus on one thing per edit 6.Read the work out loud 7.Work backwards, sentence by sentence 8.Rest, relax, re-read 9.Ask someone else to take a look

6. 1. Spelling 4. Grammar Edit it 2. Capital letters 3. Punctuation

8. 1.Spelling Medieval Cholera Unhygienic 4. Grammar throne/thrown Edit it 2. Capital letters Black Death Poor health 3. Punctuation Line 17 - tackle the problems.

9. Why do many people chose to get married? There are a number of reasons why many still get marryed today. the obvious one is they are in love and want to comit to each other. christians say we are all made in Gods image and because he is omni-benevolent we should show our love through marriage. Secondly, it cud be that they want to have children. Finally, they’re may be financial reasons for the couple deciding to marry.

10. Your turn – 12 minutes Vows Faithfulness Commitment Omni-benevolent Legal Beliefs Religious Children Christian God Capital letters at the start of sentences Their There They’re Of and have Use RE words

11. “I've found the best way to revise your own work is to pretend that somebody else wrote it and then to rip the living s*** out of it.” ― Don Roff (writer and filmmaker)