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3 Peer Editing 1.Make sure you have all items from the checklist in the document with the title: “James Brown This I Believe Essay.” 2.Share your document with at least 2 other students in the class. 3.You should read at least 2 other essays, and taking at least 20 minutes, provide feedback directly in the peer’s document.

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5 The worst challenge Often must face the abyss alone Must overcome his greatest fears This is where he "slays the dragon" Sometimes the hero isn't ready or has some flaw in his character, so the challenge beats him

6  The experiences that will shape the new world and self will begin shortly, or may be beginning with this experience which is often symbolized by something dark, unknown and frightening.  By entering this stage, the person shows their willingness to undergo a metamorphosis, to die to him or herself.

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8 The Journey - Initiation

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12  Although this step is most frequently symbolized by an encounter with a male entity, it does not have to be a male; just someone or thing with incredible power.  For the transformation to take place, the person as he or she has been must be "killed" so that the new self can come into being.  Sometime this killing is literal, and the earthly journey for that character is either over or moves into a different realm.

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20 Various views of the hero’s journey The hero’s journey can be represented in many ways. The hero’s journey can be represented in many ways.

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22 Various views of the hero’s journey While versions of the hero’s journey may vary, they all generally assume a process by which the hero becomes a hero. While versions of the hero’s journey may vary, they all generally assume a process by which the hero becomes a hero.

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34 Honor Code “I have neither given nor received any unauthorized aid, nor do I have knowledge of anyone else doing so.” Signature

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