1. B ODY P ARAGRAPH T WO

2. W RITING T IP : “I think,” “I believe,” “this shows me,” statements— basically anything that refers to you as the writer. No contractions (don’t, won’t, couldn’t, shouldn’t etc.) Genius idea: revise paragraph one for these issues now before we move on to paragraph two.

3. E XAMPLES OF TRANSITIONS BETWEEN IDEAS Friedman is not the only one to talk about stress and anxiety in teenage years. Peter Gray has also spent many years studying the sort of things that cause stress… Another factor is whether or not you feel like you have control over the situation or not. This factor is discussed by professor Robert Sapolsky, professor of neurology neurological sciences at Stanford School of Medicine. According to professor Sapolsky, there are a lot of different factors that influence the stress response: “

4. B ASIC OUTLINE FOR C ONNECTIONS /T RANSITIONS BETWEEN IDEAS M Connection/Transition E1 Connection/Transition A1 Connection/Transition E2 Connection/Transition A2 Connection/Transition L

5. B ODY PARAGRAPH T WO This is the Social Media part of the Teen Stressors MEAL Paragraph At least two pieces of evidence, each one from a different source

6. 1. “How to Relieve Stress” 2. “Why Teenagers Act Crazy” 3. Stress: Portrait of a Killer (Documentary notes) 4. “The Decline of Play and Rise of Mental Illness” 5. “American Psychological Association Survey…” 6. “Poll of U.S. Teens…” 7. “Push Back Start Times” 8. “Stressed out Teens with School Main Cause” 9. “Why do Social Networks Increase Stress? 10. “Facebook Spreads Rainy-Day Blues” 11. “New Study Links Facebook to Depression” 12. “Can More Friends on Facebook Induce Stress?” 13. “When Bullying Goes High-Tech” 14. “Violence: How it Affects Children” 15. “How Many Homeless Youth are in America?” 16. “Children’s Exposure to Violence” 17. “Behind Closed Doors: The Impact of Domestic Violence on Children” 18. “Relaxation Techniques: Breath Control helps Quell Errant Stress Response” 19. “Just Breathe: Body Has Built-In Stress Reliever” 20. “Notice You’re Alright Right Now” 21. “Taking in the Good” 22. “One Breath at a Time” 23. TED Talk “How to Make Stress Your Friend” 24. TED Talk “The Game that can Give You 10 Extra Years of Life” 25.TED Talk “Gaming Can Make a Better World” 26. Happy Documentary Notes 27. “The Power of Habit’