1. violent movies Do you think violence in movies should be allowed?

2. Introduction with a topic sentence In my opinion, violence in movies is okay, (reasons  )because we live in a violent world, but people might imitate the violent behaviors. So, I’d rather not watch these violent movies.

3. Body with supporting points Compare the differences between the movies / talk about violence in movies. Before the 1960’s most movies did not show much violent scenes like blood or graphic violence, but nowadays, people want scary movies or the movies that surprise people. Sex and violence in movies were not allowed in the past, but now, people think that these scenes are okay to watch.

4. Body with supporting points General ideas about violent movies Some people think that these movies are dangerous; some people say that kids will imitate these violent actions, because they don’t know that these things are not real(my own opinion/ I disagree with these points).

5. Body with supporting points My opinions about violent movies But what I think is totally different! We live in a violent world! The people around us are violent! Violent movies are just telling the world what we really are. Sometimes violent movies teach people lessons, they tell people not to be violent, not to be the bad guys, because a lot of violent characters get punished for their actions.

6. Conclusion People can choose the genre of movies they want to watch. Just remember, every movie has a lesson. The important part about watching movies is to learn the lesson behind the scenes! If everyone can learn what the movies want us to learn, even violent movies can help us! written by Jr2 Blue B2 Jammy Li