1. English 11 Writing/Communication Mr. Rinka Lesson #12
Narrative Essay
Adjective Clauses &
Appositive Phrases

2. Writing Tip #3
You can use Adjective Clauses and Appositive Phrases to combine information into one sentence and vary your sentence structures.

3. Adjective Clause
An Adjective Clause begins with a relative pronoun and describes (modifies) a noun or a pronoun. The boy who was talking with me is my brother.

4. There are 5 relative pronouns that can introduce an Adjective Clause: who whom whose which that The girl who won the Spelling Bee is from my high school.

5. The person whom you met yesterday is my English teacher
The person whom you met yesterday is my English teacher. The student whose essay you read is an “A” student. The book which I read over the summer is an American classic.

6. A movie that I really like is Hoosiers
A movie that I really like is Hoosiers. Sometimes the relative pronoun is understood. The poem that you liked so much is one I wrote last year.

7. Appositives
An Appositive is a noun or a pronoun placed beside another noun or pronoun to identify or explain it. The author Charles Dickens wrote some of Britain’s greatest novels.

8. Appositives
My friend Jim is moving to Brazil. My dog Rusty is a collie. My favorite city Boston is very beautiful.

9. Appositives Phrases
An Appositive Phrase is made up of an appositive and its modifiers. Kevin Durant, the star of the Oklahoma City Thunder, is only 24. I went to Kenyon College, a liberal arts institution in Central Ohio.

10. An Appositive Phrase usually follows the noun or pronoun it refers to
An Appositive Phrase usually follows the noun or pronoun it refers to. Sometimes, however, it precedes the noun or pronoun. The worlds most popular sport, soccer hosts the World Cup every four years.

11. An Appositive Phrases are usually set off by commas
An Appositive Phrases are usually set off by commas. However, if the Appositive is a single word closely related to the preceding noun, it should not be set off by commas. My sister, a teacher like me, lives in Milwaukee. My sister Karen lives in Milwaukee.

12. Commas are always used when Appositives refer to proper nouns. Mr
Commas are always used when Appositives refer to proper nouns. Mr. Rinka, our English teacher, also played and coached basketball. Marc, my best friend, is a basketball coach.

13. Writing Tip #3
You can use Adjective Clauses and Appositive Phrases to combine information into one sentence and vary your sentence structures.

14. Using Adjective Clauses & Appositive Phrases in Your Writing
Washington DC is our Nation’s Capital. It has many monuments, museums and government offices open to the public.

15. Washington DC, which is our Nation’s Capital, has many monuments, museums and government offices open to the public. Washington DC, our Nation’s

16. One of my favorite books is The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald
One of my favorite books is The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald. This is a story that questions the validity of the American Dream. It really made me think how literature can affect social thinking. I wonder if literature is an effective means to social change? (47 words)

17. The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, one of my favorite books, questions the validity of the American Dream, and made me wonder if literature, which can affect social thinking, is an effective means of change. (36 words)

18. Narrative Essay
A narrative essay tells a story from your own life experiences or observations that makes a point you are trying to make while telling an interesting and entertaining story.

19. Narrative Essay Assignment
Frederick Douglas employed interesting ways to help him learn. Referencing his techniques for self- education, create a narrative on how you learned to do something in an interesting way. #12 Frederick Douglass Narrative

20. Narrative Essay Assignment
If you have trouble recalling something that you did, think of observations you have made of others and what they did or stories you have heard about how others employed unusual methods to learn something.

21. Essay Structure
Introductory Paragraph: What you wanted to learn and why? Body Paragraphs: Methods you used to learn. Concluding Paragraph: The results of your efforts.

22. The Writing Process Step #1 = Prewrite Step #2 = Rough Draft
Step #3 = Reread & Share
Step #4 = Revise
Step #5 = Edit
Step #6 = Final Draft

23. Step #1 - Prewrite
Brainstorm for ideas. Make a list of possibilities that would make an interesting story. Improving my basketball skills. Teaching reluctant students. Motivating basketball players. Teaching my son to ride a bike.

24. #12 Graphic Organizer Narrative
Step #1 - Prewrite
#12 Graphic Organizer Narrative

25. #12 Narrative Essay Rough Draft
Step #2 - Rough Draft
#12 Narrative Essay Rough Draft

26. Narrative Essay Assignment
Frederick Douglas employed interesting ways to help him learn. Referencing his techniques for self- education, create a narrative on how you learned to do something in an interesting way. #12 Frederick Douglass Narrative

27. Narrative Essay Assignment
If you have trouble recalling something that you did, think of observations you have made of others and what they did or stories you have heard about how others employed unusual methods to learn something.

28. Assignment #1
Brainstorm your ideas, pick a format for organizing your argument and create a prewrite. #8 Graphic Organizer #8 Blank Outline Final

29. Assignment #2
Using your prewrite, create the rough draft of your narrative.

30. English 11 Writing/Communication Mr. Rinka Lesson #12
Narrative Essay
Adjective Clauses &
Appositive Phrases