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Poetry A Lesson on Form
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Consider this…. -- ---- ------------------ ----------- ----- -----
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And this….
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Luna You were my first dandelion wish, my cotton candy kiss, and sweet lullaby. With you nested in the palm of my hand, we became one with the night, ruling over the stars in the sky. You have been my guiding light through sleepless nights, my muse, and friend, always lending a listening ear, and offering your soft, glowing light to ease my fears. You are my warm, goodnight moon, Luna. Marie Summers
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Street Music by Arnold Adoff
T h i s c i t y: t h e a l w a y s n o i s e g r i n d i n g up from the s u b w a y s u n d e r g r o u n d: slamming from bus tires and taxi horns and engines of cars and trucks in all v o c a b u l a r i e s of clas flash screeching hot metal l a n g u a g e c o m b i n a t i o n s: as p l a n e s o v e r h e a d r o a r an o r c h e s t r a of rolling drums and battle blasts assaulting my ears w i t h n o i s e of t h i s c i t y: street music.
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Mother to Son – Langston Hughes Well, son, I'll tell you: Life for me ain't been no crystal stair. It's had tacks in it, And splinters, And boards torn up, And places with no carpet on the floor -- Bare. But all the time I'se been a-climbin' on, And reachin' landin's, And turnin' corners, And sometimes goin' in the dark Where there ain't been no light. So boy, don't you turn back. Don't you set down on the steps 'Cause you finds it's kinder hard. Don't you fall now -- For I'se still goin', honey, I'se still climbin', And life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
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A poem by e.e. Cummings…. i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go,my dear;and whatever is done by only me is your doing,my darling) i fear no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true) and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant and whatever a sun will always sing is you here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
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TO BE NOBODY BUT YOURSELF IN A WORLD WHICH IS DOING ITS BEST NIGHT AND DAY MAKE YOU EVERYBODY ELSE - MEANS FIGHT THE HARDEST BATTLE ANY HUMAN BEING CAN NEVER STOP FIGHTING
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Form Notes Consider the power of this next arrangement, where death is emphasized by its placement on its own line: death has not touched me yet The end word of a line is always emphasized by the fact that the reader holds it in his mind until his eyes scan back to the beginning of the next line. Short lines provide a sense of anxiety, as do line breaks that provide a surprise twist: death has not touched me yet. By placing "yet" on its own line, I've provided a surprise twist on the line above it, and leave the reader with a sense of the implied foreboding of when death will touch the speaker in the poem.
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Choose the word you want to end your line on carefully
Choose the word you want to end your line on carefully. For instance, consider a few ways of breaking the following phrase, “death has not touched me yet”, which is from my poem "Elegy for Bridges"-- death has not touched me yet.
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"The Red Wheelbarrow" by William Carlos Williams: So much depends upon a red wheel barrow glazed with rain water beside the white chickens. This poem is full of enjambment if we change things with punctuation we discover that the impact of the poem changes. Consider if the poem had been written as follows: "So much depends upon a red wheelbarrow, glazed with rainwater, beside the white chickens."
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