1. EXERCISE 20

2. NO.1 (Worse) It is well known that a majority of Taguchi method applications have the capacity for addressing a single-response problem. (Better) Most Taguchi method applications can address a single-response problem.

3. NO.2 (Worse) It may be said that computers have the ability to incorporate kinds of equipment in order that the user is in a position to interact with the computer. (Better) Computers can incorporate kinds of equipment so the user can interact with the computer.

4. NO.3 (Worse) It is a fact that the network cards have the opportunity to be upgraded to meet the connection speeds in the event that the campus upgrades to l00Mbps hubs and routers. (Better) The network cards can be upgraded to meet the connection speeds if the campus upgrades to 100Mbps hubs and routers.

5. NO.4 (Worse) It is evident that the college is able to make an informed decision through means of understanding the capabilities and cost difference for both l0Mbps and l00Mbps. (Better) The college can make an informed decision by understanding the capabilities and cost difference of both 10Mbps and 100Mbps.

6. NO.5 (Worse) It has been found that any error that might happen will be more destructive in light of [in light of ：鑑於 ; 根據 ; 從... 觀點 ] the fact that XYZ applications is in a position to make direct calls to the hardware. (Better) Any possible error will be more destructive since XYZ applications can make direct calls to the hardware.

7. NO.6 (Worse) It has long been known that the logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted considering the fact that an eavesdropper [ 偷聽者 ] actually wants to gain the ID and password. (Better) The logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted because an eavesdropper wants to gain the ID and password.

8. NO.7 (Worse) It is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all intents and purposes a good operating system in a situation in which the user has many requirements. (Better) We believe that Windows 95 is a good operating system when the user has many requirements.

9. NO.8 (Worse) It is possible that the error affects the necessary requirements when attempting to ascertain [ 查明, 確定, 弄清 ] the location of the variables. (Better) The error might affect the requirements when attempting to find the variables.

10. NO.9 (Worse) It is noted that 10Mbps network cards are basically becoming obsolete for the reason of their slow data transfer rates. (Better) 10Mbps network cards are becoming obsolete because of their slow data transfer rates.

11. NO.10 (Worse) It is interesting to note that monitoring features in most cases inform the user provided that a performance bottleneck occurs. (Better) Notably, monitoring features usually inform the user if a performance bottleneck occurs.

12. NO. 11 (Worse) It is the operator who makes a determination of the questions as to the phase should be implemented. (Better) The operator determines whether to implement the phase.

13. NO. 12 (Worse) There is a guideline that makes a provision of the necessary requirements. (Better) A guideline provides the requirements.