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4. Introduction Hook? Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea?  Is there a hook?
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5. Introduction
Do you speak English? Many students in school are learning English, however they do not always understand what people are saying. They also do not understand what they read. The solution to these problems is effective study habits. Students must use effective study habits to learn faster and get better grades.

6. Introduction
Many students in school are learning English, however they do not always understand what people are saying. They also do not understand what they they read! The solution to these problems is effective study habits. Students must use effective study habits to learn faster and get better grades.
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7. Body Paragraphs TS? SD? CS ?  Is there a topic sentence?
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8. Body Paragraph 1
Many students in school do not speak English well. They do not always understand what people say. They do not get enough practice. They study in English class, but speak their own language everywhere else. They cannot understand when they read because they do not read outside of class. These bad habits slow down how much English they learn. TS SD CS

9. Body Paragraph 1
Many students in school do not speak English well. They do not always understand what people say. They do not get enough practice. They study in English class, but speak their own language everywhere else. They cannot understand when they read because they do not read outside of class. These bad habits slow down how much English they learn.
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10. Body Paragraph 2
How do students solve this problem? They must have effective study habits. One good habit is to practice English all day long. Another helpful habit is to read all the time in both English and their own language. Students should develop effective study habits to learn English significantly faster.
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11. Conclusion Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? Is there a thesis
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12. Conclusion
If a student does not understand English very well, they should develop effective study habits. They should practice English all day long and read a lot of books in English and other languages. Effective study habits save time. Be a successful student and get them!

13. Conclusion
They should practice English all day long and read a lot of books in English and other languages. Effective study habits save time. Be a successful student and get them!

14. Add details, descriptions
Remove remove word or sentences that do not make sense
Move words and sentences that fit in another spot
Substitute replace words for meaning and excitement
little boy
miserable
sad

16. Capitals names, places, titles, “I”
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commas, quotation marks,
question marks, apostrophes
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Capitals names, places, titles, “I”
do you speak English? Many students in School are learning English. They do not always understand what People are saying. they also do not understand what they read. The solution to these problems is effective study habits. Students must use effective study Habits to learn faster and get better grades.
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yesterday My dad helped me so i was Happy.
fatima ali and noora abdulaziz went to the mall to buy things for eid.

18. Usage match nouns and verbs correctly
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Usage match nouns and verbs correctly
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Do you spoke English? Many student in school is learning English. They not always understand what people are saying. They also do not understanding what they read. The solution to this problems is effective study habits. Students must use effective study habits to learn faster and get better grade.
BONUS
Yesterday the kid play a game and they had fun.
The girls at school is nice because they helped me.

19. Punctuation full stops, exclamation points,
commas, quotation marks,
question marks, apostrophes
Do you speak English Many students in school are learning English They do not always understand what people are saying. They also do not understand what they read, The solution to these problems is effective study habits. Students must use effective study habits to learn faster and get better grades

20. Spelling All words. Use a dictionary
Due you speak English? Many students in scool are learning English, however they do not always understand what people are saying. Thy also do not understand what they read. The solotion to these problems is efective study habits. Students must use effective study hebits to learn faster and get better grads.

21. Peer Editing

23. Steps to Peer Editing

26. Step 1