1. Grammar Review 1

2. Errors you should not make Tense and agreement.

3. Subjunctive He wanted to find other people to substitute me. Without director's rejection against this proposal, I have been fired already. I would feel better if he was singing a lovely lullaby with soft voice, but anyway, his voice was not charming at all, and even kind of harsh to my poor ears.anyway

4. Article, Tense & Diction Making choices is one experience that everyone will encounter in the daily life. My performance in TV drama,"Fly Me to the Moon," brings me a lot of new experiences, including making many good friends, improving my acting level, realizing what world is like outside the campus and family, etc. Making choices is one experience that everyone encounters in daily life. My performance in the TV drama," Fly Me to the Moon," brought me a lot, (of new experiences,) including the many good friends I made and improvement of my acting. Most importantly, I got to realize what the world is like outside (the) campus and my family.

5. SS or Sentence Structure: Run-On The more surprising thing is he lives in Boston which is the place I would go every summer, and his father teaches music composition in Berklee College of Music which is the school I had already apply and would enter after I graduate from college!