1. 10 Keys to Achieving Better Style

2. Avoid Excess Too many lists Too many bullets Too many short paragraphs Too much enumeration…

3. Avoid Abstract or Unecessary Pronouns ThisThese ThatWhich ItThey Those

4. Avoid Starting Too Many Sentences With the Same Subject

5. Avoid “to be” and “to have” verb forms, especially when used with passive voice

6. Avoid Stacking Prepositional Phrases Behind the tree over the hill under the barn with the big door.

7. Avoid Ending Sentences with Prepositions or Verbs Requiring Objects Seriously, I don’t know what his emotional defect is.

8. Keep Subjects and Verbs Close Together

9. Pay Attention to the Concrete Verb to Word Ratio In plans for investment portfolios, a variety of investments is recommended by financial planners because of their resistance to economic changes. (1/21) When they plan investment portfolios, financial planners recommend a variety of investments because they resist economic change. (3/17)

10. Watch Sentence Length This appendix contains a brief discussion of certain economic and demographic characteristics of the area in which the county is located and does not constitute a part of this official statement, and this appendix has been obtained from the sources noted, which are believed to be reliable, although no investigation has been made to verify the accuracy of such information.

11. Don’t delay the subject so far that it becomes hard to find.

12. Avoid dangerous beginnings to sentences This …..without a clarifying noun to follow It ….. By ….. followed by a participle (by following, by forgetting, etc.) Being as….Being that