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书面表达: 你班两名同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法,李明 课上睡觉晚上熬夜,而王英课上专心听讲晚上早睡。 请用英文描述他们的学习状态及其产生的后果, 并谈谈你的看法。 Style: A.Argumentative article B.Persuasive article C.Narrative article D.Comparative article 1.one kind of things 2.another kind of things 3.author’s opinion Main structure:
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1 。优秀( 22-25 )能写明全部要点,行文连贯。有效的使用了语句 间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。用词确切,表达清楚,语言 基本无误,语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较 复杂句式或较高级词汇所致 2 。良好( 18-21 ) 能写明全部或几乎全部要点,行文基本连贯, 表达基本清楚,语言有少量错误,其中已影响到部分意思表达 的词语 3 。一般( 13-17 )能写明大部分要点,行文不连贯,但意思仍能 表达清楚,多数句子基本正确
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Li Ming is a hard- working boy. He always stays up to study, so that he always feels tired and sleeps on the classes. Wang Ying is also hard-working, but she never stays up. On the day, she listens to the teachers carefully at the school, and on the night, she sleeps well at home. Though both of them use the same time in studying, Wang Ling study well while Li Ming always finds it difficult to work out some questions. I think to study well doesn’t need to stay up, it only request us to do the things at the proper times.
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LiMing and Wang Ying are two students of Senior three. They both work hard but they have different learning methods. Liming often stays up for study, but it directly results in his low spirits in class. It is quite often that he can’t help sleeping in class. As for Wang Ying, she does quite the reverse. She mainly concentrates herself on classes and goes to sleep early at night. The outcome is obvious:low spirits always wander around Li Ming and poor marks have been troubling him. On the contrary, Wang Ying leads a happy life and gets high marks. I think it is the efficiency that makes the difference. As is known to all, spirits also play an important role in one’s study. So we should have a good rest and study more efficiently, which is beneficial to our study and health. 1.naturally connected 2.advanced words and phrases 3.complicated sentences ( as for, on the contrary) (directly,quite the reverse,concentrate on, wander around, outcome) (emphasis sentence,subject clause, non restriction attributive clause)
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1.what clause: 2.with phrase 3.-ing form 4.non restriction attributive clause 5.form subject,form object and subject clause 6.passive voice
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1.The result of her exam proves that what she has done is right (张冬冬) 2.Besides the efforts, what plays an important role in achieving the success is the way our efforts are made (任志帅) 3.Not all the efforts can pay off, as is the case with Li (任志帅) 4.We can’t afford to go against the natural way in which the things develop (王金泰) 5.On the contrary, Wang Ying concentrates more on listening to the teacher in class, making it possible for her to have a early sleep at night. (李伯森) 6.With a good sleep, she keeps to be energetic so as to keep a steady high quality of study (李伯森) 7.Losing the precious study time and being sleepy in the day, liming’s grades are falling down (韩雅宁)
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8. Maybe this is an evidence for the conclusion that having a rest timely is of more significance to study, especially for these who love to sleep. (王晓璐) 9. As the days go by, Wang Ying has made great progress in her study, leaving Liming alone behind, and complaining that his effort was in vain. (董文文) 10.To think it over on the other hand, you will find it understandable about their final results.
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Change the following sentences into better forms: 1. People all know that Taiwan belongs to China 2. Sometimes, I forget to lock the door. 3.Though the weather was very cold, the fans was still expecting the football super star would appear at the airport 4.Last year, we visited that magnificent palace. Its beauty can’t be described in words. As is known to all the people, Taiwan is a part of China. There are many moments when I forget to lock the door. Despite of the freezing cold weather, the fans remained expecting the football super star would turn up at the airport. Last year, we paid a visit to the magnificent palace,whose beauty is beyond expressions
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5. Her hair falls off day after day. It worried her a lot. 6.He came back home very late. But unfortunately, he found the expensive things in the house were stolen. 7.He stared at the screen of the TV set and pretended not to see me come in 8. We used to take a walk along the river side at sunset. What worries her a lot is that her hair falls off day after day. His hair falls off day after day, which worries her a lot He came back home very late, only to find that the expensive things in the house gone. He stared at the screen of the TV set, pretending not to see me come in There was once a time when we took a walk along the river bank when the sun was setting
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Consolidation 你班有两类同学,一类学生积极参加学校活动,例如: 俱乐部,体育运动等。另一类学生在学习上花很多时间 ,很少参加社交活动。请根据以上内容写一篇短文, 谈谈自己对两种学生的看法
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