1. 写作中的重点句型 与常见错误 特级教师：李俊和

2. 1. At first he didn’t hear anything at all. 一、 各类作文的重点句型 写 事

3. 3. Finally he got up, opened the door and looked around. 2. But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.

4. 2. She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes. 1. She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. 写 人

5. 3. She is good at spoken English. 4. She has visited a lot of countries.

6. 1. Liaoning Province lies in the northeast of China. 写地方 2. It is rich in many kinds of natural resources, such as coal and petrol. 3. It is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.

7. 1. Attention, please!/ May I have your attention, please! 写通知 2. A meeting is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon.

8. 3. Please be there on time. 4. That’s all. Thank you.

9. 1. I’m writing to ask for advice. 写信 写信 2. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

10. 3. I am fine but very busy recently, learning English. 4. Please remember me to your parents.

11. 1. In my opinion, I prefer traveling by train rather than by plane. 议论 2. For one thing, a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.

12. She prefer __________ for a walk rather than __________ at home. A. to go; stay B. going; to stay C. go; staying D. to go; staying

13. 3. Above all, it’s safer traveling on a train than traveling on a plane. 4. In a word, I will always travel by train if I’m not in a great hurry.

14. 英语的常用时态有十六种，一般根据上下文和时 间状语来确定时态。 二、 高一学生写作中的常见错误 动词的时态

15. 1. I will tell her about that when she will come tomorrow. 将 will come 改为 comes 。

16. 2.The boy opened his eyes for a moment, looking at the captain and then died. 此处 look 并非伴随状语，把 looking 改为 looked 。

17. 3. I have bought this bike for ten years and I am still using it now. 把 bought 改为 kept 。

18. 4.I haven’t learnt any English before I came here. 应把 haven’t 改为 hadn’t 。

19. 1. The two thieves have been disappeared. 动词的语态 把 been 去掉。

20. 2. The building built now will be our teaching building. 在 built 前加 being 。

21. 3. He is being operated by the famous doctor. “ 给... 做手术 ” 应为 operate on sb. ，所以在 operated 后加上 on 。

22. 4. I wonder if the doctor has been sent. 原因同上，应在 sent 后加上 for 。

23. 5. The book written by him is sold well. 应改为： The book written by him sells well.

24. 1. We are going to talk about the problem discussing at the last meeting. 非谓语动词 把 discussing 改为 discussed 。

25. 2. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. 把 Seeing 改为 Seen 。

26. 3. English is easy to learn it. 把 it 去掉。

27. 4. I will get somebody repair the recorder for you. 在 repair 前加 to 。

28. 5. It’s no use to send for the doctor. 把 to send 改为 sending 。

29. 1. I will go unless he invites me. 状语从句 本句应改成： I won’t go unless he invites me 。

30. although 和 but 不能同时用在一句话中，去掉任 何一个都可以。 2. Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.

31. 此句有两种改法： I will stay until he comes back. 或 I won’t leave until he comes back. 3. I won’t stay until he comes back.

32. 1. An orphan is a child who’s parents are dead. 定语从句 把 who’s 改为 whose 。

33. 2. This is the very thing which I lost yesterday. 此处引导词用 that 。

34. 3. This is the car for that I paid a high price. 引导词放在介词后时，只能用 which.

35. 4. She is one of the students who has passed the exam. 把 has 改为 have 。

36. 5. This is the place where we visited last year. 把 where 改为 which 或 that 。

37. 6. China is a developing country, that is known to all. 非限定性定语从句的引导词不会是 that ，因此把 that 改为 which 或 as 。

38. Have a nice day!